Olivia Sabb's Portfolio (Composition II)

My paper is about how Gen Z will benefit greatly from college, especially with the developing world. Gen Z is the next generation that will be or are already in college. Some schools are pushing the importance of college and college prep activities and camps onto their Gen Z students, but some may not find college to be important, or don't want to. This paper will explain how college will be essential to Gen Z, especially when it comes to job opportunities and financial goals or any goals that need hefty amounts of money. Olivia Sabb Professor Atkins-Gordeeva ENGL 1312 February 5, 2022 Gen Z incoming! Is college worth it for us? Nowadays, going to college has become more important than ever especially for those coming of age to go to college. Although Gen Z is on track to becoming the most educated generation, some may not attend college and those without college that have big goals that need the education will have a harder time achieving them. I have many cousins that attem...

This rough draft was used for my essay in Project 1. I used my draft like a skeleton and used it to have factual evidence to work off of for my final draft. The feedback I received from my peers and professor was very useful and pointed out my citation and MLA formatting errors. My professor advised that I include my own experiences and thoughts in my paper as well as making my thesis present throughout my paper as I trailed from my original thesis. I listed my changes in green so I could improve my draft later. Olivia Sabb Professor Gordeeva ENGL 1312 February 5, 2022 Is college worth it for my generation?   [Str onge r intro, aligning my paper to the  left]                College is one of the most important decisions in one's life and graduating with at least a bachelor's degree provides a plethora of opportunities during and after college. More likely to receive a high-paying job, better-enhanced skills, a broader range of ...